pages/adventuring/elyan-gareth.md

@@ -49,24 +49,7 @@ Elyan Gareth is a brash and exiled gunslinger [warrior] who crafts unique object
 
 ### Arcs
 
-
-
 * **Justice**
-    * Bring Tebeza to justice for killing Belendyl
-    * Steps: ...
-    * History
-        * Worked in mining guild Steelvein Mountain Works with half-elf friend Belendyl Naefaren
-        * Elyan and Belendyl were skilled specialists - rather than mining, they worked on research, equipment,
-          smokepowder, etc.
-        * Overseen by Half-orc woman Tebeza of the Prosperous Depths (so-named for her focus on extracting riches from
-          the earth, and business acumen)
-        * Belendyl was secretly working on a new ammunition, more powerful than smokepowder
-        * Cave-in event traps workers - Tebeza decides not worth recovering workers (site not profitable)
-        * Belendyl uses his new formula to blast a rescue path to the workers.
-        * Tebeza demands formula. Belendyl, wanting to quit, refuses. He is locked up to be forced into crafting it
-          again.
-        * Elyan attempts to break him out. Tebeza kills Belendyl before they can escape. Elyan escapes. Swears revenge
-          on Tebeza.
 * **[Redeem Ibrandul](arcs#redeem-ibrandul)**
 
 ### Cyphers

pages/adventuring/index.md

@@ -91,17 +91,17 @@ the game forward. More details can be found [here](play-by-chat).
 ### Cypher Tables
 
 Treat all cypher types as manifest by default. Roll a d20 and use that result for which table to roll on (they're all
-built as percentile tables, so you can roll a d20 and a d100 for both together).
+built as percentile tables, so you can roll d20 + d100 for both together).
 
-| Roll   | Origin/Type              |
+| Roll   | Origin/Type             |
-|--------|--------------------------|
+|--------|-------------------------|
-| 1--4   | *Core*/Manifest (p.382)  |
+| 1--4   | *Core*/Manifest (p.382) |
-| 5--8   | *Core*/Subtle (p.383)    |
+| 5--8   | *Core*/Subtle (p.383)   |
-| 9--11  | *Godforsaken*            |
+| 9--11  | *Godforsaken*           |
-| 12--20 | *Core*/Fantastic (p.384) |
+| 12--20 | *Core*/Fantastic (p.382 |
 
 Most instances work in the game and could be represented as at least one kind of physical item, or roll on the cypher
-form table in *Godforsaken* (which would be a combined roll of d20; d100; d100).
+form table in *Godforsaken* (which would be a combined roll of d20 + d100 + d100).
 
 ### Map of Faerûn
 

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@@ -12,32 +12,13 @@ which haven't been written of or described yet.
 
 ### Creation
 
-In the beginning, The One Beyond spawned three goddesses out of the endless nothingness --- the twin sisters Nydia,
+In the beginning, The One Beyond created three goddesses out of the endless nothingness --- the twin sisters Nydia and
-goddess of light and Dysthia, goddess of darkness, and Etra, goddess of creation. The twin sisters both coveted domain
+Dysthia, goddesses of Light and Darkness, and Etra, goddess of World. The twin sisters both coveted domain over Etra,
-over Etra, and waged a bitter war, bringing about the light of the stars and the darkness of the void, creating the
+and waged a bitter war, bringing about the light of the stars and the darkness of the void, creating the universe. As
-universe. As they sparred over eons, their wounds shed their essence and, merging with that of Etra's, created the
+they sparred over eons, their wounds shed their essence and, merging with that of Etra's, created the planes, including
-planes, including the material plane which is (inaccurately) considered to be Etra herself. The war between the sisters
+the material plane which is considered to be Etra herself. The war between the sisters also brought forth the Etran
-also brought forth the Etran pantheon --- darkness and light combining chaotically to produce divine concepts of sun,
+pantheon --- darkness and light combining chaotically to produce divine concepts of Sun, Moon, Life, Death, and so on
-moon, life, death, and so on --- countless immortal forces that shape the universe.
+--- countless immortal forces that govern the universe.
-
-### Civilization
-
-There is no agreed upon definition --- or even guess --- of the age of the world, or life on Etra. Modern scholars
-believe there are at least one hundred millennia of empires rising and falling that have shaped the world, but this is
-as much a guess as any previous attempt to estimate the age of Etra. This belief holds that in those lost ages multiple
-progenitor races native to Etra gave rise to great civilizations and further peoples before disappearing from the record
-of Etra, be it by gradual decline, war, leaving for other worlds, or so on. Little is known about these races other than
-the undocumented relics and ruins left behind.
-
-The oldest known history is owned by the elves and dwarves, both ancient races in their own right. They shaped the lands
-above and below long before humankind rose to prominence, and in a way shaped the ecology of Etra itself --- their vast
-cities and dungeons have become part of the world's genetic memory, and it naturally spawns weird dungeons, corrupted or
-blessed plazas, and the like. The living world creates not just flora and fauna, but also grand towers and abominable
-strongholds.
-
-It is claimed by some that an immense magical calamity brought about by the elves and dwarves brought Etra --- both the
-world and the goddess --- to the brink of annihilation, with this corruption its/her only chance at survival, but both
-races' leaders and scholars vehemently reject such slander.
 
 ## The Material Plane